Lonesome Water
Roy Addison Helton, b. 1886
Lonesome Water (New York: Harper & Brothers, 1930).

It's interesting to see the "folk process" at work here. In the column to the left are the original words, and to the right are the words as I learned them. Fascinating to see how they evolved / changed!

The original version:

Drank lonesome water:
Weren't but a tad then
Up in a laurel thick
Digging for sang;
Came on a place where
The stones was holler;
Something below them
Tinkled and rang.

Dug where I heard it
Drippling below me:
Should a knowed better,
Should a been wise;
Leant down and drank it,
Clutching and gripping
The overhung cliv
With the ferns in my eyes.

Tweren't no tame water
I knowed in a minute;
Must a been laying there
Projecting round
Since winter went home;
Must a laid like a cushion,
Where the feet of the blossoms
Was tucked in the ground.

Tasted of heart leaf,
And that smells the sweetest,
Paw paw and spice bush
And wild briar Rose;
Must a been counting
The heels of the spruce pines
And neighboring round
Where angelica grows.

I'd drunk lonesome water,
I knowed in a minute
Never larnt nothing
From then till today;
Nothing worth larning,
Nothing worth knowing.
I'm bound to the hills
And I can't get away.

Mean sort of dried up old
Groundhoggy feller,
Laying cold out here
Watching the sky;
Pore as a hipporwill,
Bent like a grass blade;
Counting up stars
Till they count too high.

I know where the grey foxes
Uses up yander,
Know what'll cure ye
Of ptisic or chills,
But I never been way from here,
Never got going:
I've drunk lonesome water.
I'm bound to the hills.
 
 
 
 


The way I learned it:

I drank lonesome water
I was a child then
Up in the willow brake
Huntin' for a sign
Came on a place where
The rocks was made hollow
And the water beneath me
Rippled and rhymed

I drank lonesome water
Knowed in a minute
Shoulda done better, Lord,
Shoulda been more wise
But I knelt down and drank of it
Slowly and freely
'Neath the overhanging cliffs
With ferns in my eyes

Now it wasn't tame water
Knowed in a minute
Musta been lyin' there
Since Winter went home
Lyin' in the place where
The rocks was made hollow
Lyin' in the shadow
Of the cool marble stone

(verse omitted)








(verse omitted,
tho I remember
Dierdre singing it)






Now if you meet a dried up
Groundhoggy fella
Poor as the whippoorwill
Blue as the sky
Lyin' on his back in
The cool grassy meadow
Countin' the stars
'Till stars count too high

'Cause I know where the grey fox
Runs out yonder
I know what'll cure you
Of aches and of chills
But I'm never gonna leave here
Never get a-goin'
I drank lonesome water
I'm bound to these hills

I'm bound to these hills
And I can't
Get away .......
 

Here's another one of his poems, called "Old Christmas."
and here's Steven Vincent Benet's "The Mountain Whip-poor-will"